Writing Detective: Lydia
Joy is the shade of the beautiful bright sun shining on the golden sand.
by Alex
It tastes like a freshly made pavlova, ready to be demolished by a peckish human being.
by Amelia S
It is the mouthwatering taste of melted chocolate oozing down your throat.
by Gemma
Anger is the colour of red blazing hot chilli sauce.
by Diego
It tastes like a piece of milk chocolate sliding down your throat and melting into many marvellous moments.
by Emilie
Sadness smells like a revolting dead rat swarmed by flies.
by Lydia
WELCOME to ROOM 9! We are an enthusiastic bunch of Year 5 and 6 children at Christ the King School. Our School Motto is, "Stepping up for Success" and that is exactly what we are aiming for. We are being inspired to be EXTRAORDINARY in our thinking and learning.
OUR MISSION:
This Blog is designed to showcase our writing talents in Room 9. Each week two children will be selected to be writing detectives. Their mission will be to select pieces of writing that are inspiring and creative. They will publish these pieces on the Blog so that everyone can marvel at the exciting writing talent emerging in Room 9.
YOUR INVITATION:
Your job is to comment positively on the individual pieces that you read and tell us how they captivated your attention. All authors love the feedback, so please let us know what you think as it will continue to inspire and motivate us to write more!
HAPPY READING!
Gemma you are so talented betta than me :):):):p
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