OUR MISSION:

This Blog is designed to showcase our writing talents in Room 9. Each week two children will be selected to be writing detectives. Their mission will be to select pieces of writing that are inspiring and creative. They will publish these pieces on the Blog so that everyone can marvel at the exciting writing talent emerging in Room 9.

YOUR INVITATION:

Your job is to comment positively on the individual pieces that you read and tell us how they captivated your attention. All authors love the feedback, so please let us know what you think as it will continue to inspire and motivate us to write more!

HAPPY READING!

Tuesday 19 May 2015

Writing Detective: Lydia


Joy is the shade of the beautiful bright sun shining on the golden sand.
by Alex

It tastes like a freshly made pavlova, ready to be demolished by a peckish human being.
by Amelia S

It is the mouthwatering taste of melted chocolate oozing down your throat.
by Gemma

Anger is the colour of red blazing hot chilli sauce.
by Diego

It tastes like a piece of milk chocolate sliding down your throat and melting into many marvellous moments.
by Emilie

Sadness smells like a revolting dead rat swarmed by flies.
by Lydia






1 comment:

  1. Gemma you are so talented betta than me :):):):p

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