OUR MISSION:

This Blog is designed to showcase our writing talents in Room 9. Each week two children will be selected to be writing detectives. Their mission will be to select pieces of writing that are inspiring and creative. They will publish these pieces on the Blog so that everyone can marvel at the exciting writing talent emerging in Room 9.

YOUR INVITATION:

Your job is to comment positively on the individual pieces that you read and tell us how they captivated your attention. All authors love the feedback, so please let us know what you think as it will continue to inspire and motivate us to write more!

HAPPY READING!

Wednesday 13 May 2015

Writing Detective : Miss Amelia P

Anger is the stench of baking being burnt, the fire alarms ringing with irritation.
Written by Macy

Joyfulness is the fantastic fragrance of freshly picked lavender.
Written by Emilie

A sea of motionless bodies lie before my eyes, death and destruction is everywhere, blood oozes out of the recently executed bodies.
Written by William

Happiness tastes like sensational strawberries, the juice trickles down my throat.
Written by Hannah

Fun looks like Donald Duck trying to surf.
Written by Joshua

Sadness is the colour of a dim, gloomy grey on an early winters morning.
Written by Lydia

James runs off and joins a game of cricket while I'm still standing there like an insignificant, wobbling statue in the cold.
Written by Libby

Laughter is like a beaming shade of sapphire blue.
Written by Zarah

Awesome colours of leaves, goodbye green, see you later.
Written by Isaac

Love is the colour of a gorgeous ruby red, glistening in the sunlight.
Written by Abby






4 comments:

  1. EXTRAORDINARY!! Love, love, love!! From Miss Gill :)

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  2. Great writing room 9 : . ]

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  3. well done room 9 your writing is fantastic!!!!!! :-)
    From Amelia.P

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  4. I love reading your writing. Well done Room 9!

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