Writing Detective: Nyko
She moved like a headless chicken with ants in her pants.
by Zarah
The dogs howling sounded like a tortured soul.
by Matthew
WELCOME to ROOM 9! We are an enthusiastic bunch of Year 5 and 6 children at Christ the King School. Our School Motto is, "Stepping up for Success" and that is exactly what we are aiming for. We are being inspired to be EXTRAORDINARY in our thinking and learning.
OUR MISSION:
This Blog is designed to showcase our writing talents in Room 9. Each week two children will be selected to be writing detectives. Their mission will be to select pieces of writing that are inspiring and creative. They will publish these pieces on the Blog so that everyone can marvel at the exciting writing talent emerging in Room 9.
YOUR INVITATION:
Your job is to comment positively on the individual pieces that you read and tell us how they captivated your attention. All authors love the feedback, so please let us know what you think as it will continue to inspire and motivate us to write more!
HAPPY READING!
I am enjoying reading your Gold writing. Ka pai.
ReplyDeleteArohanui Mrs K-C
Zarah, I love how you have made the reader want to dance- this sentence reminds me of how enthusiastic you are. Ka Pai!!
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