Writing Detective Nyko
Shooting through the choppy white capped waves like a blazing arrow.
by Isaac
I feel like I'm free falling, like a flightless bird.
by William
Slashes of lightning cut through the clouds.
by Lydia
Charging soldiers run into position for the first of many invasions.
by Max c
The wastelands would sprout stretches of scarlet from the blood red colour of the poppy flower.
by Libby
Weaving through the waves as quick as a dolphin.
by Molly
Were greeted by a remarkable sight of scarlet, blood red beautiful poppies.
by Abby
Red flowers were blooming upon their feet.
by Hannah
WELCOME to ROOM 9! We are an enthusiastic bunch of Year 5 and 6 children at Christ the King School. Our School Motto is, "Stepping up for Success" and that is exactly what we are aiming for. We are being inspired to be EXTRAORDINARY in our thinking and learning.
OUR MISSION:
This Blog is designed to showcase our writing talents in Room 9. Each week two children will be selected to be writing detectives. Their mission will be to select pieces of writing that are inspiring and creative. They will publish these pieces on the Blog so that everyone can marvel at the exciting writing talent emerging in Room 9.
YOUR INVITATION:
Your job is to comment positively on the individual pieces that you read and tell us how they captivated your attention. All authors love the feedback, so please let us know what you think as it will continue to inspire and motivate us to write more!
HAPPY READING!
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