OUR MISSION:

This Blog is designed to showcase our writing talents in Room 9. Each week two children will be selected to be writing detectives. Their mission will be to select pieces of writing that are inspiring and creative. They will publish these pieces on the Blog so that everyone can marvel at the exciting writing talent emerging in Room 9.

YOUR INVITATION:

Your job is to comment positively on the individual pieces that you read and tell us how they captivated your attention. All authors love the feedback, so please let us know what you think as it will continue to inspire and motivate us to write more!

HAPPY READING!

Monday 11 May 2015

WRITING DETECTIVE: MISS AMELIA P

Sprinting for cover as the winter breeze blows furiously.   Written by Elina


Feeling overwhelmed,
Looking for peace and forgiveness,
The unbearable sight of blood and enemies,
The war goes raging on.    Written by Macy


Joy is seeing playful puppies pounce in loose food found under the table.    Written by Max C


Happiness feels like a big warm hug after a bad day.     Written by Amelia S


Her skin was as wrinkled as hen's feet but she still looked stunning on the catwalk!    Written by Libby


Her voice was like an angel's but her face, not so much   Written by Amelia S









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5 comments:

  1. Unknown11 May 2015 at 22:22

    Very well done

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  2. Unknown11 May 2015 at 22:44

    Hi Room 9 - great Writing Detective work this week. I especially like the picture given by Max's sentence about puppies. I am going to share your writing gems with Room 5. Keep up the great writing.
    Arohanui Mrs K-C

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  3. Unknown14 May 2015 at 00:55

    I love reading these fantastic pieces of writing. Room 9, you must be breathing in some "special power air" because your writing is on fire! Love Miss Gill

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  4. Anonymous3 June 2015 at 15:01

    i love all your stories they are extroditnary from maia and amelia

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  5. Anonymous29 July 2015 at 00:32

    Elina great line mrs coyle

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